Overall pretty good, it has quite a dreamy/sleepy feel to it. The outro has a good contrast to the rest of the song. The only thing i would say is the effect you used on the vocals reverb or delay maybe? seemed a bit much at times. R4R
Overall pretty good, it has quite a dreamy/sleepy feel to it. The outro has a good contrast to the rest of the song. The only thing i would say is the effect you used on the vocals reverb or delay maybe? seemed a bit much at times. R4R
It's a story of drunken plight haha, so the woozy sounds hopefully compliment that well. Thank you - I used a ringshifter and guitar amp on the vox in the chorus ("hold off") section... I may consider dialing that down. Thought it sounded nifty, but I realize it saps a bit of clarity and it can be used effectively without the Ringshifter delay and Spring Verb hitting too hard. Thanks for the review and suggestions :3
Quite atmospheric and moody and the pauses worked really well it, deffinitly paints a picture in my mind. However i think it could to with a part where it goes a little off the road to offer a greater sense of intensity. Good work. R4R
Thank you for your input! :)
This has potential, but I kind of felt it was leading somewhere but then it ended.
It's still a work in progress, will get back to it when I have more motivation :P
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